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 A quite extensive overview of the whole work is, for instance, given in the latest publication as specified in the attached CV.
 
 I am highly interested in the offered research project involving methods that go beyond ground-state density functional theory.
-Modeling a self-organization process realized by the Monte-Carlo technique within the diploma thesis followed by the doctoral research investigations utilizing the more sophisticated empirical potential molecular dynamics approach, which were extended by superior, highly accurate quantum-mechanical calculations, allowed to gain a considerable amount of experiences within the respective methods and the focus on structures and structural evolution on the nanoscale.
+Modeling a self-organization process realized by the Monte-Carlo technique within the diploma thesis followed by the doctoral research investigations utilizing the more sophisticated empirical potential molecular dynamics approach, which were extended by superior, highly accurate quantum-mechanical calculations, allowed to gain a considerable amount of experiences within the respective methods with a focus on structures and structural evolution on the nanoscale.
 Now, I would be happy to enter the field of methods that go beyond ground-state density functional theory with respect to both, application and development of respective theories, as I would be given the opportunity in your research group.
-Furthermore, advancing the focus of investigations to the electronic structure, correlations and non-equilibrium systems --- exciting physics that I partially noticed at the fringes from other devisions localized in Augsburg --- would constitute an asset with respect to my scientific record.
+Furthermore, advancing the focus of investigations to the electronic structure, correlations and non-equilibrium systems --- exciting physics that I partially got to see at the fringes from other divisions localized in Augsburg --- would constitute an enrichment with respect to my scientific background.
 
 Doing computational materials science at an experimental physics division demanded a high level of autonomy.
 And still, a vivid interaction with experimental scientists was given, my supervisors being amongst them.