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@@ -244,11 +244,11 @@ this suggests that agglomeration of Ci indeed is expected, but no C clustering.
 
 slide 13
 
-this is reinforced by the plot of the binding energy of Ci dbs
+this is reinforced by the plot of the binding energy of dumbbells
 separated along the 110 direction.
 a capture radius clearly exceeding 1 nm is observed.
 however, the interpolated graph suggests the disappearance of attractive forces
-between the two lowest separation distances of the defects.
+between the two lowest separation distances.
 
 this supports the assumption of C agglomeration and the absence of C clustering.