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 During my research, I investigated defect structures in carbon implanted silicon by means of atomistic simulation studies employing both, first-principles and classical potential methods.
 Next to interesting results concerning structures of isolated and combined defects as well as transitions between these configurations, conclusions on the not yet fully understood process of silicon carbide precipitation in silicon could be derived.
 
 During my research, I investigated defect structures in carbon implanted silicon by means of atomistic simulation studies employing both, first-principles and classical potential methods.
 Next to interesting results concerning structures of isolated and combined defects as well as transitions between these configurations, conclusions on the not yet fully understood process of silicon carbide precipitation in silicon could be derived.
 

-The project, financially supported by the Bavarian Research Foundation, officially headed by Prof. Stritzker (University of Augsburg) and supervised by Prof. Lindner (PD in Augsburg back then), involved research periods abroad, which I have gratefully taken advantage of within the Computational Materials Physics group of Prof. Nordlund at the University of Helsinki, Finland.
+The project, financially supported by the Bavarian Research Foundation, involved research periods abroad, which I have gratefully taken advantage of within the Computational Materials Physics group at the University of Helsinki, Finland.

 Being experts in the respective field, investigations involved molecular dynamics simulations employing an empirical potential to describe the silicon-carbon interaction.
 
 Being experts in the respective field, investigations involved molecular dynamics simulations employing an empirical potential to describe the silicon-carbon interaction.
 

-In a further collaboration with the Theoretical Physics group of Prof. Schmidt and Dr. Rauls at the University of Paderborn, the studies were extended to include first-principles calculations based on the density functional theory.
+In a further collaboration with the Theoretical Physics group at the University of Paderborn, the studies were extended to include first-principles calculations based on the density functional theory.

 Obtained results completed the investigations and, by considering and working around shortcomings of the classical approach, supported the ones gained from previous studies.
 
 A quite extensive overview of the whole work is, for instance, given in the latest publication as specified in the attached CV.
 
 I am highly interested in the offered research project involving methods that go beyond ground-state density functional theory.
 Modeling a self-organization process realized by the Monte-Carlo technique within the diploma thesis followed by the doctoral reaseach investigations utilizing the more sophisticated empirical potential molecular dynamics approach, which were extended by superior, highly accurate quantum-mechanical calculations, allowed to gain a considerable amount of experiences within the respective methods and the focus on structures and structural evolution on the nanoscale.
 Obtained results completed the investigations and, by considering and working around shortcomings of the classical approach, supported the ones gained from previous studies.
 
 A quite extensive overview of the whole work is, for instance, given in the latest publication as specified in the attached CV.
 
 I am highly interested in the offered research project involving methods that go beyond ground-state density functional theory.
 Modeling a self-organization process realized by the Monte-Carlo technique within the diploma thesis followed by the doctoral reaseach investigations utilizing the more sophisticated empirical potential molecular dynamics approach, which were extended by superior, highly accurate quantum-mechanical calculations, allowed to gain a considerable amount of experiences within the respective methods and the focus on structures and structural evolution on the nanoscale.

-Consequently, it is now natural to enter the field of methods were normal density functional 
-However, naturally, ...
+Consequently, it is now natural to enter the field of methods that go beyond ground-state density functional theory.
+

 
 I would like to ... go beyond ...
 ... and correlated systems ... dynamic correlations ...
 
 I would like to ... go beyond ...
 ... and correlated systems ... dynamic correlations ...