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 \phone{0821}{436915}
 
-\signature{Frank Zirkelbach}
+\signature{Frank Zirkelbach (AllerBester)}
 
 \subject{{\bf Application for the postdoctoral position in the area of dymanical processes at the nanoscale}}
 
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 A quite extensive overview of the whole work is, for instance, given in the latest publication as specified in the attached CV.
 
-I am highly interested in the offered research project covering the simulation and modeling of battery materials with a focus on silicon based anode materials for various reasons.
-Next to the familiarity as well as my interest in the materials system, I am pretty much convinced that battery technology constitutes a key factor to solve some of the many problems related to the ongoing energy revolution.
-I would like to have the possibility to contribute.
-Furthermore, I would like to continue and deepen my research activities in the field of computational materials science and the respective methods such as density functional theory and applications beyond.
+I am highly interested in the offered research project involving methods that go beyond ground-state density functional theory.
+Modeling a self-organization process realized by a rather simple Monte-Carlo code within the Diploma thesis followed by the doctoral reaseach investigations utilizing the slightly more sophisticated empirical potential molecular dynamics approach, which was extended by the more accurate quantum-mechanical calculations, allowed to gain a considerable amount of experiences within the respective methods and the focus on structures and structural evolution on the nanoscale.
+I would like to ... go beyond ...
+... and correlated systems ... dynamic correlations ...
+... to get into ... as we as the underlying theory.
 
-Doing computational science at an experimental physics division starting with the the Diploma thesis, has, since then, demanded a high level of autonomy.
+Doing computational materials science at an experimental physics division starting with the the Diploma thesis, has, since then, demanded a high level of autonomy.
 And still, a vivid interaction with experimental scientists was given, my supervisors being amongst them.
 
-Please find attached my CV (including the list of publications) for your review.
-For any further information please feel free to contact me.
+Please find appended my CV (including the list of publications) for your review.
+For any further information, please feel free to contact me.
 I would be happy to send you the latest (not yet available) publication or the preliminary version of my thesis.
 
 I would be very glad to hear from you.