more language improvements

diff --git a/posic/publications/c_defects_in_si.tex b/posic/publications/c_defects_in_si.tex
index e20a732ea7105222318015c9cdf34374d78183e5..40aa9ee8f63dbe7c3d69bbbf87d1ccfa3029f394 100644 (file)
--- a/posic/publications/c_defects_in_si.tex
+++ b/posic/publications/c_defects_in_si.tex
@@ -251,11 +251,12 @@ Already the geometry of the most stable dumbbell configuration differs considera
 The classical approach is unable to reproduce the correct character of bonding due to the deficiency of quantum-mechanical effects in the potential.
 %ref mod: language - energy / order 
 %Nevertheless, both methods predict the same type of interstitial as the ground state configuration, and also the order in energy of the remaining defects is reproduced fairly well.
-Nevertheless, both methods predict the same type of interstitial as the ground state configuration, and also the relative energies of the remaining defects are reproduced fairly well.
+Nevertheless, both methods predict the same type of interstitial as the ground state configuration.
+Furthermore, the relative energies of the other defects are reproduced fairly well.
 From this, a description of defect structures by classical potentials looks promising.
 % ref mod: language - changed
 %However, focussing on the description of diffusion processes the situation is changing completely.
-However, focussing on the description of diffusion processes the situation is changed completely.
+However, focussing on the description of diffusion processes the situation has changed completely.
 Qualitative and quantitative differences exist.
 First of all, a different pathway is suggested as the lowest energy path, which again might be attributed to the absence of quantum-mechanical effects in the classical interaction model.
 Secondly, the activation energy is overestimated by a factor of 2.4 compared to the more accurate quantum-mechanical methods and experimental findings.
@@ -274,7 +275,7 @@ Classical potentials, however, fail to describe the selected processes.
 This has been shown to have two reasons, i.e. the overestimated barrier of migration due to the artificial interaction cut-off on the one hand, and on the other hand the lack of quantum-mechanical effects which are crucial in the problem under study. 
 % ref mod: language - being investigated
 %In order to get more insight on the SiC precipitation mechanism, further ab initio calculations are currently investigated.
-In order to get more insight on the SiC precipitation mechanism, further ab initio calculations are currently being investigated.
+In order to get more insight on the SiC precipitation mechanism, further ab initio calculations are currently being performed.
 
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 \section*{Acknowledgment}