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 I am highly interested in the offered research project involving methods that go beyond ground-state density functional theory.
 Modeling a self-organization process realized by the Monte-Carlo technique within the diploma thesis followed by the doctoral research investigations utilizing the more sophisticated empirical potential molecular dynamics approach, which were extended by superior, highly accurate quantum-mechanical calculations, allowed to gain a considerable amount of experiences within the respective methods with a focus on structures and structural evolution on the nanoscale.
 Now, I would be happy to enter the field of methods that go beyond ground-state density functional theory with respect to both, application and development of respective theories, as I would be given the opportunity in your research group.
-Furthermore, advancing the focus of investigations to the electronic structure, correlations and non-equilibrium systems --- exciting physics that I partially got to see at the fringes from other divisions localized in Augsburg --- would constitute an enrichment with respect to my scientific background.
+Furthermore, advancing the focus of investigations on the electronic structure, correlations and non-equilibrium systems --- exciting physics that I partially took notice of as they are pursued by other divisions localized in Augsburg --- would constitute an enrichment with respect to my scientific background.
 
 Doing computational materials science at an experimental physics division demanded a high level of autonomy.
 And still, a vivid interaction with experimental scientists was given, my supervisors being amongst them.
 
 Please find appended my CV (including the list of publications) for your review.
 For any further information, please feel free to contact me.
-If desired, I would be happy to send you an electronic version of my thesis.
+If requested, I would be happy to send you an electronic version of my thesis.
 
 I would be very glad to hear from you.